Entangled Comments

o what a tangled web we weave with our deceits, at times out of fear to protect the dear... great write. your poems have such a smooth rhytmic flow. thought provoking write Mamta

I am sending u like a sheep amidst wolves, so be wise as serpent and harmless as dove..Christ...One must not allow oneself to deceived.....A Good Write.............

Yeah a very moving story well narrated using poetic expressions...thanks for sharing...love shan...10+++

Sandra this poem is beautiful plsssssssssssss tell me the context for it Anurag :)

Since the written word is considered immoral nice line. i think you refered to an incident. however, you have put it nicely. shan

A Web unfolded poetically.Very good narration

So honest and clear in the advice given...Love yor style! Always direct and to the point....you cut to the chase and one never has to wonder what you're writing about! Nice one, Sandra!

There is much wisdom and common sense packed into this cleverly penned poem about deceit and its ramifications, and the double standards of morality based on class. Your have chosen your rhymes carefully and structured the poem to give the reader a sense of orderliness and cadence. Your first line from Walter Scott grabs the reader's attention with both hands. Excellent piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Ohhh...A love story gone awry. A pity. And about this line of yours...'Since the written word is considered immoral..' The written word, no doubt, is a definitive record for a number of purposes...and consequences. Such as the love letter. The 'immoral' aspect is debatable under societal norms (the actors of the story would know this better than the readers) . The spoken word, likewise, can also be 'immoral'. But who decides the moral code? ? Unfortunately, the victims of spurned love know where the shoe pinches.... Nice write Sandra. God bless. Cheers. Subroto

A good meaningful write...could prove a bitter warning to many who dare, dare not...10

a treasure becomes trash here...the decision ofa relationship is a family bound one here....truth written