Wednesday, October 7, 2020

Entangled With Form Comments

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A throbbing world the eyes reveal,
And one rides its multiple spinning carousels,
Unconsciously addicted to experiences,
Identifies itself with the perishable realm.
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Ayni Poet
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Terry Craddock 11 October 2020

Swift Sleek Stealth Predator Octopus an octopus ocean engages life swift sleek stealth sea marine predator when rapid prey intent motion unleased turbo-charged all eight arms engaged this is grip not of life but death perfectly adapted to habitat surroundings brain mind current intellect eye flowing with a personality shark curiosity growing octopus is camouflage invisible disappearing octopus is ink cloud danger deceptive fleeing Dedicated to the poet Ayni Poet.

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Terry Craddock 11 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Deceptive Appearances Prey Within Reality Shifts' inspired by the poem 'Entangled With Form' by the poet Ayni Poet and dedicated to the poet Ayni Poet.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 October 2020

But not the real you - the Absolute Infinity, Which is never truly entangled with any form! - it feels written on the one kind of metaphysical sense to read this poem; well expressed the last two lines on the summery of whole poem; yeah, on this earth everything is illusory; we, the conscientious lives are intoxicated to the illusion- the not real and this non reality step by step dissolving but to what; no one knows- mysterious the whole earth is...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 October 2020

A well written poem. Truly wonderful and brilliant...5 stars*****

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Terry Craddock 07 October 2020

'All appearances are deceptive, Those asleep fall easy for their seductive moves, ' the eye to the lie, surface or soul, perceive depths or shallows

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