Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Enstranged Changes Comments

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 Estranged changes, Monumental experiences, The conquering of love is the instrument of understanding life.
 My words cannot change the world’s current state. We inhale poisonous thoughts, exhale hope, and halt because, we want more than what is given.
 Have you thought of how things are different yet similar, your touch familiar with continuous white lies, what’s mine not yours and sometimes yours what is not mine.
 You see my mind is engraved in the past, never to come alight or at my sight, cause the world’s current state blinds, lies, and deprives.
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Thato Maluleka
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Anjali Sinha 30 July 2009

good write nice structure but wish there were some rhymes -10 anjali

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