Ensnared Comments
A few words uttered, barely a smile passed
And I was in love
It took so little, on your part
And already I was a prisoner
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The complexity of feelings, the loss of freedom and a plea to feel the air once again on the skin. The poem actually speaks of the love of freedom and independence. Ensnared by the surrendering of self.
A candid and compelling cry for freedom!
It’s so unfair that the fire That gives you warmth, makes me burn Love that builds you up Tears me apart. Fire is the same but effects are different, one is only warm like gases who don't have a regular shape, become light and go up. The other is a solid, warmed till it its warmth reaches the melting point, is melted and turns into a liquid, a boiling liquid. Perhaps that is the difference of a man and a woman.
Love ek ehsaas hai choo jaye jise woh khaas hai, kuch khushi kuch gham deta hai ye....kehta nahin kuch lekin karwata hai yeh....This came to my mind after reading your lovely poem.....100 on 10.
A breathtaking picture of a man hit by Cupid. Ensnared by love, he declares 'I want to break free from the bondage' but it is not so easy to wriggle out. It looks like a running commentary. Wonderful poem. Thanks.
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7/21/2025 9:26:18 PM # 1.0.0
Hi Nosheen, It is so unfair that........the love that builds you up tears me apart The contrasting emotions built up by the nice choice of words brings out extra-ordinary poetry. Enjoyed reading. Congrats.