Monday, August 10, 2009

Enrichment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes,
too much weight on the soul
breaks the mind,
hurts the whole.
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Sally Plumb Plumb
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T S 22 August 2009

A hurting soul is soon to mend and stronger it will become Beautiful Poetry A 10 plus from me Tracy x

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Sally P. P. 10 January 2020

Thank you for your lovely comment, T S.

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nomad omnia 21 August 2009

Excellent Sally, I can feel the weight, but the balance of the piece makes it enjoyable to bear. N

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Sally 18 August 2022

Thanks for your comment, Nomad

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Tom Balch 14 August 2009

A great piece Sally, the last stanza is just brilliant,10 Regards Tom

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Sally 09 September 2022

Dear Tom, Thankyou for your welcome comment

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