Saturday, December 24, 2005
Enraptured Comments
Rating: ★3.3
You wander through my dreams -
A ghost of a thought drifting in and out
Coloring my sleep with sunshine and shadow,
You fill my unconscious mind -
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Daniel Tyler
24 December 2005
Yes, I like this poem. The image of your sleep being colored is particularly strong and it has that watery sub-conscious feel through the repetition and questioning. Very strong. Daniel Tyler
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8/6/2025 12:11:40 PM # 1.0.0
Linda, Really big questions! Short and sweet, still questions! I will keep reading to find some answers!