Monday, October 27, 2008

Enough Said Comments

Rating: 5.0

“Votes for women! ”
Was the cry.
Reaching upward,
To the sky.
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Jeremy Eddy
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Joscelyn Alderdice 16 January 2009

A poem with a beat you can dance to, lol! This is a very well written poem :)

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Frances Macaulay Forde 27 October 2008

The rythum of this piece works well. An interesting juxtaposition of ideas in the 1st and 2nd stanzas. Although it works, I think the third stanza needs one more edit... But well done again!

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