Saturday, March 14, 2009

Enough Mind To Speak Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sat on a rock in the middle of a forest
And screamed to the trees
'I have lost everything! '
'You have lost nothing, ' they would whisper back
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Kristen Brewster
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Ronny Self 21 March 2009

Wowser! Well done! You are quite exceptional at writing blank and free verse. I like the set scene, you work everything in so you get across the message while at the same time setting up a story that's easily followed. I give ya 10. Keep it up!

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