Sunday, September 17, 2006

Enough Ku Comments

Rating: 5.0

You offer me naught
but everything that you are -
Can that be enough?
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Linda Ori
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Barry Van Allen 20 February 2007

Linda, That is one interesting question!

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Alison Cassidy 29 September 2006

Superb writing LInda. You have captured the essence of the old Haiku tone (and of course the structure) and yet have added an emotional immediacy and intimacy which is very very moving. I really like this. Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Francesca Johnson 18 September 2006

So many questions......no answers.....but an adorable little poem, Linda. Love, Fran xx

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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

linda...i really enjoyed this haiku...made so much sense...love...nalini

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 September 2006

MIDNIGHT EXPRESS ON 'KU...HOW DO YOU DO.....IT! ? A 3 Stanza Haik! This could easily be a pristinely structured 3 stanza piece of freestyle Poetry...And no one would know the difference9ALMOST NO ONE) SO, WITH AN AIR OF ENIGMATIC CLEVERITY, YOU HAVE ONCE MORE IMPRESSED THIS FACINATED MIND, THAT CONTINUES TO AWE AT YOUR DIVERSE ART-FORM'''''''''''''''''frank/fjr

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