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A very impressive write, well penned and poignant! This write shows me that you have what ti takes to make it in the poetry world! God Bless you and keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (I hope if time permits you would have the chance to read and enjoy my poems titled also: ENOUGH and ENOUGH IS ENOUGH, thanking you in advance...)

I try to understand but I am not sure I do it well..I feel someone dying alone and in pain and your heart screams out, revolting at some kind of fate or maybe even god, you question life itself and cry of its unfairness (might have been right?) .But I think (forgive my dare) this person's life was not in vain, he left someone here to cry and dearly remember about his name, his face, even his pain..and maybe this remaining person with all the cry and hurts inside, got to became an open heart bit nicer, more understanding of others, hopefully bit kinder with himself too, to let his smile to get out and wider here and then.. great poem, filled with the raw pain comming straight from heart, got also straight to mine,10, thank you very much for share.