Shut the windows.
Close the door.
Our love doesn't live here
Anymore.
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Feeling of separation so powerfully expressed! Every line says it in no uncertain terms.Though it is a sad fact, it is beautiful poetry.
Well done. The short sentences and phrases ech the curt sound of a window and door slamming shut.
Short and brutal, in accordance with the poet's notes. Leaves me feeling sad, which was probably the intent.
That thing Shakespeare said 'it's better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all' never feels true when your hearts been ripped out. Brutal but fantastic work.