Enough Comments

I wrote the poem 'Mourn Innocence Lost In Children' inspired by the poem 'Enough' by the poet Paul Brookes and dedicated to Paul Brookes.

the more I read this poem the more I love it 'wrap up tight into a hedgehog ball spikes, spikes, spikes.' 'we learn darkness and shadow are safe blend, pretend, don't offend become chameleon.' the wisdom in this line is obvious, so the appreciation focuses upon the originality

sadly even children learn this hiding lesson early, humanity and nature both need chameleon skins in this often cruel predation world

very well penned this logical masterpiece of work, it is full of poetic imagery and metaphor. it deserves 10++ keep writing and stay blessed

we learn darkness and shadow are safe blend, pretend, don't offend become chameleon.