Monday, July 30, 2012

Ennui And Fright Comments

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I would rather be somewhere else,
wandering the world at night,
than be here by myself,
living in constant ennui and fright.
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Soren Valentine
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Scott Mcqueen 11 December 2012

The first and second sections (pardon my lacking literary jargon) are brilliant. I felt the end began to stray away from the structure that you had, which is not necessarily a bad thing. However, it ended quite abruptly.

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