The first and second sections (pardon my lacking literary jargon) are brilliant. I felt the end began to stray away from the structure that you had, which is not necessarily a bad thing. However, it ended quite abruptly.
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The first and second sections (pardon my lacking literary jargon) are brilliant. I felt the end began to stray away from the structure that you had, which is not necessarily a bad thing. However, it ended quite abruptly.