Saturday, April 17, 2021

Enmity ~ Comments

Rating: ★4.8

The childhood love between the SUN and the MOON
Turned out in such an enmity,
When one appears the other disappears,
And supporters follow their masters
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M. Asim Nehal
childhood Friends
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Michael Jack 23 April 2021

Interesting poem.

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Indira Renganathan 20 April 2021

Humorous and interesting very much....last line is the highlight...5*****

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Gordon Walter 19 April 2021

Only unsettled souls and cathemeral are common friends.

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Varsha M 18 April 2021

Okay this is the real truth. Common froends are those who are always there for both of them. Good sir.

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Kostas Lagos 17 April 2021

Excellent! I love the concluding line!

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M. Asim Nehal

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Nagpur
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