Saturday, September 5, 2020

Enlightenment 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spring illuminates
Old bones in memory's cold
Graveyard. The fragrance
Of budding flowers frees up
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Shaun Cronick 14 September 2020

A poem well worthy of a reread for the season of spring is my favourite and like good poetry by good poets helps to inspire me. Thanks again Dominic and need I say more. Take care.

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Dominic Windram 09 September 2020

Thanks Shaun....it's in the form of exact syllabic verse, which means that no words are wasted. I'll soon be starting my online course: Writing Poetry via Oxford University. It should provide me with a much greater understanding of poetic form and structure. Consequently, I'll probably begin to experiment with new styles etc.

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Shaun Cronick 05 September 2020

I like this for it's so articulate and so neatly written. You never waste words Dominic nothing out of place in any of your poems to tumble down like a top heavy house of cards. A great message and the illumination on old bones is inspired and great to read poetry. A deserved full score and take care my friend and many thanks too.

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