Enlightenment Comments

Love how you gave personality to the clouds. Another beautiful poem.

good enlightened vision...we are helpless dependants of nature, the super relative...

I JUST LOVE THIS >>>>> 'Some playing dodgems with the sun, forcing it to hide behind them, ' That has such a fluid feel to it Ernestine *WOW* Love duncan X

A splendid read Enlightenment, this poem you've written - eloquent! ! *10*! ! Best always! Friend Thad

Ernestine, I loved that last stanza. I don't know about the daytime heat, but I've felt plenty of their showers of late. Another great poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. Hugs David