Saturday, December 5, 2020

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Rating: 5.0

The ink of wise
Key to nice sky
To rise life's sun
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
sky
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 December 2020

I am learning something new. Than Bauk! Thanks for the note and explanation, Mahtab! The Burmese style! The rhythm of wise - rise- nice - - - -brilliant.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 December 2020

Thanks for introducing Burmese form of poetry, 'Than-Bauk', to the readers of PoemHunter.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 December 2020

A well crafted poem........ Truly pretty and sublime....5 stars *****

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 December 2020

Like the light! ! Life with the muse of the sun! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2020

A little poem carrying a message! A value laden piece...5 stars

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