Enlightened Life Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE
Enlightened Life
The ink of wise
Key to nice sky
To rise life's sun
-03.12.2020 Chattogram
The Than-Bauk is a Burmese form with very simple rules: Three lines. Four syllables per line. The final syllable of the first line rhymes with the third syllable of the second line and second syllable of the third line.
ABCD
EFDG
HDJK
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A well crafted poem........ Truly pretty and sublime....5 stars *****
Like the light! ! Life with the muse of the sun! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A little poem carrying a message! A value laden piece...5 stars
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8/8/2025 11:21:07 AM # 1.0.0
I am learning something new. Than Bauk! Thanks for the note and explanation, Mahtab! The Burmese style! The rhythm of wise - rise- nice - - - -brilliant.