Thursday, July 3, 2008

! Enlighten Me, Please Comments

Rating: 2.9

How exactly did this happen?

You come to me after all this time
Ripe with emotion and passion -
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Linda Ori
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Shashendra Amalshan 06 August 2009

This is a very passionate write indeed.. Hey this is a work of a true poet..... I don't have that much experience so I m not in a position to enlighten you Linda.. Yet there has to be that chemistry isn't it? .. this is a very nice write.. I enjoyed this one.. good one to relax my mind.. with love shan

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Meggie Gultiano 16 November 2008

yes, and i agree with Ivan.Thanks for this sharing. Love, Meggie

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 September 2008

...astonishing thoughts/verse beautifully expressed.........10

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Ivor Hogg 13 July 2008

If the time is right and the chemistry is right you have no choice Nature takes control

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 July 2008

This one is a focused in topic. That is always good. Prose writing has a way of taking your focus and altering it. You have to keep bringing it back. I thought you did that well. I never lost the track. GW62

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David Desantis 08 July 2008

i just read tai's poem about the same subject...looks like alot of women on here are losing control to a special someone...nice writing your quite the poet

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Tai Chi Italy 06 July 2008

It's the chemistry my dear lucky lady! lol Great write, I know these feelings well and nothing but how you describ it, is good enough for Tai, It just doesn't happen without really wide eyes! lol Thanks for this great lift into another wet sunday in Blighty

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James B. Earley 05 July 2008

My friend its simply part of the human condition!

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Thad Wilk 03 July 2008

Great read Linda! You certainly have explained love, its all there written, in your Poem above! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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But L, we rely on YOU to enlighten us; and you have. That old cliche about two people not even needing to speak because they knew what each other is thinking and feeling.... some find it tedious... I find it beautiful. t x

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Kesav Easwaran 03 July 2008

'No longer two separate entities Together we flow into one...' sincere love, glorified here...good enjoyable write, linda...

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Man on the Moon 03 July 2008

I'm glad I read this. Very good

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