! Enlighten Me, Please Poem by Linda Ori
! Enlighten Me, Please
How exactly did this happen?
You come to me after all this time
Ripe with emotion and passion -
The universe explodes with wonder
We are infused with its magic;
No need for words any longer
There are no words, only sensation
Caught up in the splendor of the moment -
Primal need, hunger, lust.........love?
You read my mind with your body
We need only to act and react
Souls connecting with every breath
You breathe me in;
No longer two separate entities
Together we flow into one
Pleasure and passion now double
Energies fused in the fire.
Can you explain this phenomenon?
This thing that you do to my soul
I'm wondering how did this happen.................
Enlighten me, please.
7/3/2008
It's the chemistry my dear lucky lady! lol Great write, I know these feelings well and nothing but how you describ it, is good enough for Tai, It just doesn't happen without really wide eyes! lol Thanks for this great lift into another wet sunday in Blighty
Great read Linda! You certainly have explained love, its all there written, in your Poem above! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad
But L, we rely on YOU to enlighten us; and you have. That old cliche about two people not even needing to speak because they knew what each other is thinking and feeling.... some find it tedious... I find it beautiful. t x
This is a very passionate write indeed.. Hey this is a work of a true poet..... I don't have that much experience so I m not in a position to enlighten you Linda.. Yet there has to be that chemistry isn't it? .. this is a very nice write.. I enjoyed this one.. good one to relax my mind.. with love shan
yes, and i agree with Ivan.Thanks for this sharing. Love, Meggie
...astonishing thoughts/verse beautifully expressed.........10
If the time is right and the chemistry is right you have no choice Nature takes control
This one is a focused in topic. That is always good. Prose writing has a way of taking your focus and altering it. You have to keep bringing it back. I thought you did that well. I never lost the track. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/10/2025 1:36:32 PM # 1.0.0
i just read tai's poem about the same subject...looks like alot of women on here are losing control to a special someone...nice writing your quite the poet