Friday, May 13, 2005

Enjoyment Comments

Rating: 3.1

Doth has generously given to me
Thee divine way to enjoy thine
So with beauteous favor I return pleasure to thee
That your giving tongue lends to mine
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Savannah Churchill
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Charles Chaim Wax 25 December 2005

to be free! pure wonder never felt like that plodding along so I admire the feeling you proclaim and if possible to stay within its magic air a fine poem

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Ben Cassel 22 November 2005

I'm not sure where this poem is going with you. You do not have enough of a grasp of Elizabethan English to make a go of this. It's not a good sign if the reader can't tell whether or not it's a parody.

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and Shakespeare you are not.

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Michael Shepherd 13 May 2005

.. and do you wonder Shakespeare took early retirement?

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