~ Enigmatic Navel ~ Comments

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In thine poems words are danc'n! Beautiful poem like a beauideal butterfly! ! ! !

Very sensual and lovely

Super, I agree the visuals are fantastic. Loved reading this.

Nice word use not really my kind of thing though

Coalescing sweat beads In vermillion of setting sun Psychedelic color play In sparkling diamond Butterflies zoom out Heart sweetening Dance on arc of rainbow Voluptuosly flummox me G(-_-) D owww great line: thumb: +10

Most original and marvellous - that's all I can say.

eloquently told, words are dancing. marks10 shan

beautiful song it can be sang.i like it

beautiful song it can be sang.i like it

Both compelling and captivating....excellent poem...

Oh my Niv, you did an excellent job describing 'Enigmatic Navel' your poems gives beauty to things and living forms that one would think about not in the least write about....your poetic senses are always on the alert. a 10+++

Fixed on the waist chain jingling bells Sweet soft songs of soul it spells. CP

hi friend, it is indeed very nice and exciting to read this poem on the beauty of navel.the position and shape certainly gives one excitement particularly on gyration in dance sequences.you could be the first one to write a poem admiring.congrats. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

.....Coalescing sweat beads In vermillion of setting sun Psychedelic color play In sparkling diamond Butterflies zoom out Heart sweetening Dance on arc of rainbow Voluptuously flummox me..... a stunning piece of verse that keeps a reader engaged...entertained...10+

Poor navel as you cluster and edge it, like in foreplay; And butterflies lift to your delusions and desires. Could not stop laughing, as you twist words to talk about its attachment to the mother and how your fiancée is captured in its total fatality.

amazing is the way yousay so much without saying much, it's pure talent, great to know and read your stuff. enjoyedit heartily. i didn't quite understand the last line 'why not join you too? '. it is well expresed though i wish it was easily comprehendable, nevertheless 10+++++ without much understanding....hope you would take time and reply.

Your poem has made the naval a very sensitive part of the body, lovingly, very much attractive. Good write, you poem pal Lynn

i think i need to disect the poem more for me to understand it properly but anyway, nice write. well presented

Hi Niv - this is a vey sensual poem on a sacred part of the female anatomy being the point of the connection of the umbiliacal chord. It is important that Males would treat it with gentleness and respect as an area of special significance and not just another erogenous zone. I was a Moderator for Beauty Therapy in the London Colleges and I am aware - from visits to Turkey - that Asian Ladies are more prone to navel adornment than those in the West. Your poem opens with a assertion that you regard covering the navel as archaic and that 21st Century Ladies should both dcorate the navel and display it publicly. 'Put on low waist jeans - Tattoo buterfly around - Decor with diamond - Navel ring jocund'. Verse Five - Introduces the suggestion that the decorated and gyrating navel is part of the female allurment. 'Unfolding of petals rouleau - A smiling rosebud - on your enigmatic navel. Hipsters and cropped tops allow many UK Teens to display their navels and they too take the opportunity to bejewel or tattoo. Verse Seven - leaves us in no doubt as to the sensuality of the adorned navel and its attractiveness to all. 'Psychedelic colour play - Butterflies zoom out - Dance on an arc of rainbow - Voluptuously flummox me'. Personally I find this adorned display (on the young) perfect and very emotive. It has its place in the emancipation of New Woman. The last two verses explain (to some extent) the purpose of the adornment and the display. 'My tryst your enigmatic navel - in sensuous navel - why not join you too'. A sensuous poem like this is emotionally draining but in its analysis one learns the erogenous power of a little discussed zone and one is wiser for that. Perfect in structure - controlled in its language - complete in its lesson - it merits a full TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X