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In the conglomeration of possibilities, the child of your dream endowed with vision, holds the hand of the child on the beach in front of you. The flowers of your dreams perfume the marine atmosphere like those in the garden of delicate Zen jasmine. The heart of an anterior love falls in love with the lovers holding hands on the beach, with the child between them forming the sacred pyramid of creation, in the crepuscular splendour of orange-rosy glow of the sun, sinking into the enigmatic profoundness of the sea.
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Love an enigmatic wave in the deep ocean of life! ! ! your poem varied the totality of life......it's great
What an amazing image you created in my mind, while reading this fantastic poem " Enigma" I felt as if I am at the beach and going through the gardens of the love. 10++ The heart of an anterior love falls in love with the lovers holding hands on the beach, with the child between them forming the sacred pyramid of creation, in the crepuscular splendour of orange-rosy glow of the sun, sinking into the enigmatic profoundness of the sea.....Loved it.
I kept getting amazed, absorbed and finally consumed by the enigmatic, symbolic expressions of your 'Enigma', dear poetess. Got the frissons right from the start, formulated gradually as I proceeded and finally ended in an ecstatic, cataclytic release, as a successful love story usually ends. The poem gets 10/10 from me and goes to 'MyPoemList'.