Tuesday, May 2, 2017

Enigma Comments

Rating: 4.7

The enigma of
where mental anguish ends
and
where real consciousness starts
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Prabir Gayen 06 September 2019

there is a wakefulness within us as in dream.when it recognises two opposing states it grows stronger.....nice

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

" " " there is a wakefulness within us as in dream.when it recognises two opposing states it grows stronger. " " " " awell quotable lines

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Kesav Easwaran 05 February 2019

Good philosophical poem explaining the duality in humans. Rich poetry

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 January 2019

They say, the flow of thoughts and emotions, even opposite in nature, is mind. It is the nature of the mind to think constantly. Also, I understand, consciousness, the blissful type, is the fractional silence between two thoughts. Two opposite states, what a beautiful and enigmatic concept! The quantum scientists have recently talked about this.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2018

parallel steps- march ahead together from the one of sight on the ovate things - a step is crystal clear but another step is out of reaching and from the another sight on the ovate thins- the same event upper of these sights - all are same so need to make greatest our sight; inter-sight..............

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Chandan Dey 19 June 2018

This poem is a relative comparison between two apparently different thoughts bound by a special thought. A merge between singularity and variety always creates mystery in an entity, well crafted with a deep philosophical insight. Chandan

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Akhtar Jawad 07 June 2018

Psychology of human brain very intelligently explained. A great poem.

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Raul G. Miranda 14 August 2017

I was inspired by this poem... Thanks...

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Anamika Raj 08 August 2017

If only everyone knew beauty is more than what we see, the world would be a better place. Such a beautiful poem it is.

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Paradis Winslet 24 July 2017

This is beautiful itself, i like it.

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Zion Anisius 27 May 2017

Greatly presented and most importantly your last line blind feel its touch... indicates how much love is felt and appreciated by someone who cant see it in nature by true beauty in heart.. Thank you for your beautiful words pale :)

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 May 2017

Verily, beauty refers to the soul in its true sense

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Tabasom Azadee 17 May 2017

hello i agree with you be successful

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Anzelyne Shideshe 16 May 2017

Beauty in it's essence love it

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Myiner Agony 16 May 2017

This poem is beautiful it has the perfect mood to it

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Paul Sebastian 16 May 2017

Beyond the feast of eyes ia the the beauty that beholds forever. You have painted the picture of the difference. Great write.

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Hashim Hamzat 13 May 2017

Nice crecendos

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Beauty is transient, ..fades and yet we admire it...always...great write...

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Ronell Warren Alman 12 May 2017

Solid writing here Yoonoos. I hope that all is well with you. Long time since we last chatted my friend. Take care.

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Mphathi Sompisi 12 May 2017

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmh wow i love it

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