Enigma Comments

Yes, human life is very unpredictable! It is a mixture of sorrow and joy with sorrow predominating! But we have to live on hoping that good days will come! Life can take a U turn at any time! Those who are very happy may be suddenly hurled into misfortune! So we can possibly expect a reversal of fate even if we are depressed at the moment! A very realistic presentation of life, Amitava!

Thanks for a realistic poem. The life of an ordinary man has so little to celebrate and so much to rue and cry about. There is so much sorrow and pain in our lives as you have rightly assessed: With so many things, left to be done / But ultimately being left undone, .. / This is the life what we lead /Being in the fire on a burning oven! !

Thanks for a realistic poem. The life of an ordinary man has so little to celebrate and so much to rue and cry about. There is so much sorrow and pain in our lives as you have rightly assessed: With so many things, left to be done / But ultimately being left undone, .. / This is the life what we lead /Being in the fire on a burning oven! !

Life is full of pain but still we have to live and search for happiness. Nice message scripted. Wonderful poem.

We live this life with blistering pains, Sufferings and sorrows, Still we all are dreaming For some better tomorrows. Beautiful lines. Truth of life portrayed so vividly. Life is a bundle of joy and pain that we carry till end.

Wow, such a sad poem. I was there a few years ago, I guess it was called depression. Your poem expresses so clearly very much the way I felt. It is so hard to escape, but it can be done, but if it can then life 'flourishes with joy'. Here is wishing everyone joy. Darla :)

Great message in this poem, Amitava! ! It is very compelling indeed and so true to life! We never know about life as we go on living it to the end. Give this poem a 10+. Thank you, Amitava! !