Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Engineering Desire... Comments

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'Is it Possible to Engineer Desire? '
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Frank Bana
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Ruby Root 31 July 2006

Hi Frank, It sounds like you are comparing the car to a man. Oh no. Cars break down. (ha ha) I am teasing. Excellent, unique poem. Take care.

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Ernestine Northover 26 July 2006

Very very well written Frank. a marvellous poem with great construction. Clever stuff my friend. Wonderful use of words. Love Ernestine XXX

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Austen Bradford 26 July 2006

Brilliant! I loved it- Every word is true and a magnificent observation

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