Engagement Poem by Rachel Butler

Engagement

Rating: 2.5


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)

Allying personally to the pennipotenti, free to soar and return.
Movements nevermore petitioned, to withdraw as I please.
Command me to perform what you decree,
requirements, I shall serve,
entreat, passiveness.

Surrender or conquer,
conception is metropolis of mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 September 2015

i see Eros in your lines. am i right Rachel so much to read in between your lines. passiveness, surrender, conquer me, command me to perform etc. very nice and poetic and secretive and mysterious write. thank you

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

Conception is metropolis of mind/ I love this line! ! ! ! Well-penning, Ma'am

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