Sunday, March 18, 2012

Enervated Comments

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The child within, lit his own little candle
And set it at the center of the valley so large,
Brilliantly it beamed, and gloriously illuminated all about him;
That is until, all the others came rushing in
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Tim Stensloff 19 March 2012

I love this. Not only is it lyrical, but it speaks of our society as a whole- the way that so much is imposed on so many people that want nothing more than to be who they are.

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Valerie Dohren 18 March 2012

That feeling of being insignificant - know it so well. Great write.

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