Energy (Fibonacci Sequence) Comments

voluptuous musical tremors reverberating in two lively minds Excellent with words and passion. A Fibonacci sequence at its best...10

passionate and powerful lines....a bit removed from your passion...tanka... :) the poem itself reverberates and resonates with the energy that...THE MINDS...are emitting...! i was kind of catapulted into orbit... in my effort to encompass the bounty of forceful emanations. its done very well indeed. it exudes a satisfaction and peace all its own...says a lot......! v nice liked

This is a wonderful poem where the fusion of passion and emotion expels such enormous bulk of energy enough to fill the surroundings and even the ether! A kind of frenzied ecstasy is created when body is twined with the body and spirit merged with the spirit in love..... Real beatitude! ! !

A stunning write full of passion an energy of emotions merging into one as love lights up and shadows play in two beautiful minds!

I love the flow of this poem. It appears 2 light beings travel throughout the distance of gaps in imagination that span across new dimensions into worlds that they never knew existed. Soaking in the sight and sounds of their surroundings as they connect and weave the energy of their spirit bodies and imaginations in and out of each other so much so that all of this friction is stimulating the atmosphere around them and creating life buzzing full of energetic passion. It's almost as if a 2 gods are making love and in the process they are building up all the substance needed to create a new planet and when the climax finally comes to fruition they've created a new world in which they can reside with one another together. I love this poem it's full of passion and desire, also the way it was written mirrors and echos it's form as well. Lovely Mihaela =)