Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Enemy Comments

Rating: 4.5

You look at me
But I can't look back.
I can't look you in the eyes,
Not anymore.
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Forever Underestimated
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Khairul Ahsan 15 June 2015

This is perhaps your first poem that I came across on this site. You have beautifully expressed your feelings towards a friend on whom you have lost your trust. I believe that a person who hasn't lived up to the trust reposed in him, may not necessarily be considered an enemy, first and last. I have read your short biography. Poetry is for all. It works as a gate valve for giving vent to the pent up feelings one might have, that one cannot share with others. So no big or small poet here. Anybody who can express in words, following certain norms, is a poet. Best wishes and happy writing!

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