Sunday, July 11, 2010

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I listen to my thoughts when there is time and space,
I see much disturbance and displace,
You hit me like know other,
Child,
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jayne carpenter
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Konstantin Filipov 15 July 2010

I must agree with the comment bellow. The punch line prepares the reader for an interesting and beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Konstantin Filipov 15 July 2010

I must agree with the comment bellow me, the punch line just prepares the reader for an interesting and beautiful poem!

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David Beckham 13 July 2010

I listen to my thoughts where there is time and space..this punch line truly cues you in to a great poem about an element of life! ! Well done

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