Friday, October 6, 2017

Enemies May Be Friends Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's too dark,
I think I should lit a new candle,
but I have only one candle in my bag.
Irony of fate!
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Valsa George 09 October 2017

Beautifully written! It is a nice experience to have enemies turned into friends! I could feel your ordeal through the swamp and the dark forest! But at the end you could come out of all nerve wracking experiences like a victor! A 10

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

Wonderful poem Akhtar.. You have Lighted a candle in our hearts

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Khalid Saifullah 07 October 2017

What a thoughtful metaphor, yes whom I think are our enemies may be friends in fact.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

It's too dark, . In this darkness we need light. You think wise here and you should light a new candle. Light of wisdom will motivate mind and give realization about life. Love and wisdom help to overcome obstacles. Everyone who have acted as your worst enemies a short while ago have changed in helpful friends. Love has transformed them by grace of God. Moonlight sprinkles light of calmness and happiness here. A brilliant perceptional poem is excellently penned...10

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