Endymion Comments

Written well with feeling. Simply expressed. Regards, Margery R.

Your 6-4-6 stanza meter does, indeed, add much to the placement of these cherishing words...Endymion...and what a historical figure/legend for a title! 'without reproach'...this, the most worthy phrase! Indeed! A kind read, a soothing read!

This is moving and comforting. So few words express so much.

Beautifully written Colin...perfect what else can I say?

Very good but quite sad. Again by hugo -my very name endure the cruel doomed. He and you let me think

A great illustration of a perfect love written by a novel poet.

Pristine and immaculate imagery...! ! short and beautiful

wow....short sweet and perfect

never let your faith die... its the only entity that leads till the end... :) simple and bful... like a prayer... :)

Colin Ian Jeffery...there's no other person on earth who could lead our hand..yet suffered for our sake. Our faith will always guide our way...thank your for sharing this great piece. Tess

although im not very big on christian opetry i think this is a 10. -never abandon your faith it's the last thing to leave you.

be safe with your faith...it is pure....nicely written