Thursday, September 12, 2013

Enduring The Storms Comments

Rating: 5.0

Petals fall from a flower
quietly to the ground

tree limbs dry up
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Heather Burns
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Joseph Anderson 19 September 2013

Sail on O ship of life. A brief and brilliant portrayel of life's storms- about a 10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2013

Trees and ships enduring the storms. Beautifully presented. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 13 September 2013

A wonderful poem, we can get through the storm in the end.

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Noreen Carden 12 September 2013

Hello Heather we all get tossed about in this life your poem is a beautiful description of the storms we all have to weather lovely to read

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Yasmin Khan 12 September 2013

A beautiful symbolic poem

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 September 2013

Beautiful poem..At the end of the day one can be happy that it reached home safely, thereby fighting all the storms. It gives a lot of positivity..Loved reading it.

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