My pain is my own
I would not share it
With even the most
Eager-to-please beings
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I love love love the opening line, and the poem in general. These are the words of a true fighter.
You write so simply, yet so powerfully. You inspire me, and I hope my work can be as meaningful as yours someday.
Your pain is your own, like you dont want to Put it on any one. Very strong words. Good poem.