Endlessness Of Time Comments

The future is unkown; but, to remember the past. Thanks for sharing.

This is one of your best poems I must say! We all say that we must live in the present! But our past and present are inextricably connected together that we can hardly estrange ourselves from them and they make our future to a great extent! Enjoyed!

A poem, many of us can relate to. A lovely write.

Short profound deep and brilliant write. We need to search the key from deep ocean of time. your poems are free from all complexities and common reader can easily understand. My one senior colleague told me, you know all popular rhymes like twinkle twinkle little star etc. are written in soft words. I find same in your all poems short sweet and easy with deep meaning. Thanks for share. Regards.

Short profound deep and brilliant write. We need to search the key from deep ocean of time. your poems are free from all complexities and common reader can easily understand. My one senior colleague told me, you know all popular rhymes like twinkle twinkle little star etc. are written in soft words. I find same in your all poems short sweet and easy with deep meaning. Thanks for share. Regards.

Short profound deep and brilliant write. We need to search the key from deep ocean of time. your poems are free from all complexities and common reader can easily understand. My one senior colleague told me, you know all popular rhymes like twinkle twinkle little star etc. are written in soft words. I find same in your all poems short sweet and easy with deep meaning. Thanks for share. Regards.

What a brilliantly inspiring poem, thank you dear Heather! Indeed, we cannot change the past yet I think that past will always change the future. A key may be used by some tiny ocean creature as a hiding place, who know how many lives could save.. All that we need is to make sure that our keys are not harmful so that it will not intrerrupt the endlessness of time. By the way for the one who disliked those beautiful comments (I know it's not you dear Heather) , please my friend, stop doing it for no reason, why harm the hearts of poets, they are our sensible people, courageous souls who deserve much more than a thankful bow...

Great message in this lovely write, don't make the past your future drop the key in the bottom of the ocean your future is a new place to live life to the full!

Good for you Heather. And that's exactly where such key should be. Love it.

But the door has been closed and locked, the key is thrown into the endlessness of time. Yes madam! we can't make the past come back. Very deeply and nicely composed. Thanks.

Nice poem time is forgotten and taken forward

Time and space are endless, Past is a memory. Present is a tale. Future is a fantasy.

past a reality that cant retrieve......somewhere at the bottom of the ocean........................nice