Sunday, August 10, 2008

Endlessly Comments

Rating: 5.0

for every thread that bond
is like a nerve to a flesh
crimson pump to the beat
marvel; moments keep
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Manonton Dalan
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Jim Valero 30 September 2008

Beautiful imagistic poem. Short phrases like close-ups render impassioned moments vivid to reader's imagination who can visualize the poem's suggestive imagery. The sound-content of the poem is texturally entrancing. Good work!

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June Feir-Cruz 11 September 2008

Oh! La la! Mon Dieu, beautifully written and oh so sexy.

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Estrella Baldemosa 08 September 2008

romantic...beautiful...

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Blue Eyes 24 August 2008

i love your choice of words...like pinkish which indicates to a sexy woman with hight taste...keep writing good stuff.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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