for every thread that bond
is like a nerve to a flesh
crimson pump to the beat
marvel; moments keep
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i love your choice of words...like pinkish which indicates to a sexy woman with hight taste...keep writing good stuff.
Beautiful imagistic poem. Short phrases like close-ups render impassioned moments vivid to reader's imagination who can visualize the poem's suggestive imagery. The sound-content of the poem is texturally entrancing. Good work!