Monday, November 19, 2012

Endless Walk Holder Of The Light Comments

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my body seems to slow down
the dark light shines so bright and clear
i can see who is holding the dark light it's me
the one i used to be the one i never wanted to be
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paddy jansen
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2012

No one's life is a mistake n yor remarkable even if remorseful poem shows why u need to b there. To be a reader's joy.

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Asif Andalib 20 November 2012

Endless repentance. It will make you soul pure gold. Lovely write. However I have noticed typographical errors at the end of the poem. We should write the one that was granted life as a mistake instead of the one that was granted life as an misstake

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