Thursday, December 10, 2015

Endless Wait Comments

Rating: 4.5

We wait with stars in our eyes
With a silent yearning palpitating within
Rising from the depths
Riding on a lover's wings
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 July 2022

You must have read about waiting for Godot, I can't tell you what absurdity it presents. It's not just a case to be generalized but many times we go on waiting, waiting, on and on...Loved this wonderful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2016

Like a scar from today's wound. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Loaded with life's lessons. Rich in rabid realism about the limitation of life in all its swiftness and vicissitudes!

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Manonton Dalan 07 January 2016

sometimes I wait so long I just lost interest... nicepoem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Expensive dreams and endless wait both are fantastically expressed in this wise poem.10

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Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2015

Thank you so much for such encouraging comments.

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