Endless Thoughts Comments

Outstanding poem Patricia! Always, Linda

Strong descriptive writing on a perplexing state of mind - trying to achieve balance in relationships of whatever kind. Insights and uncovering of states of mind is never easy, even for the one who seems to be reading you like an open book. The right words are always the hardest. But they do yield in the end, as they did in this fine poem Patricia. xx jim

Some rather poetic lines of choice, very nicly placed, an open book? mediforical? great write Patricia....

Oh, P, yes, the night-time navel-gazing (as I think of it) ... beautifully penned. And as Theo suggests, who could possibly not relate? Stunning. t x

'eXPLAIN THE FEELINGS THAT CIRCLE MY SOUL'... this what initiates poets to extract the beauty of poetry. Most including me can relate to it. Another 10.

Patricia, this is absolutely beautiful. I loved every line...and you know, we have all been there at one time or another... Best wishes on a classy write... Theo

I love everything about this poem Particia, excellent writing.--Melvina--