Endless Race Comments

Well done...ever endless and dissatisfied race....thank you

Endless race when we still live.............ends when we triumph but still yet t come.Nice writes Fasika.

A powerful profound duality.Keeep writing.

Very true philosophy, described very well in an understandable manner. last stanza is simply the essence and beauty of the poem.

Good philosophy Fasika. These kind of inspirations are needed to promote piece into this diseased world. Mind precedes Anger, Hatred, Lust. Well done.10 is the gift.

The mind will run An endless journey Till it looks into the depth To reconcile with its essence Until it does… The mind will run a tiresome distance wow this awaksome!