Saturday, March 5, 2011

'Endless Melody' Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life is an endless melody,
Above life's' every boundaries.
I hear it jingle, the distant echoes of elation
That hails my golden spring.
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Dave Dafes
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Rekha Mandagere 19 March 2011

Beautiful usage of metaphors, pleasant feeling, melodious tone inspire man to face the challenges of life unperturbed. Great work. Thanks. Rekhamandagere

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Mohammed Albalushi 07 March 2011

your words are amzing, pure thought form beauty nature

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Ughelli, Delta State Nigeria
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