Blowing in the wind the sail
was full force and heading
away never to return
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Bonnie, Delight with the feeling. Like a precious moment, your words create magical terrain here. So moving, so flowing, and with beautiful inner passion. Such a delightfully written piece! Take care, Robert
The power of love to transcend abandonment. A inspiring poem - eloquent and without frills. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I really do admire your work Bonnie, this poem is so beautiful. Love, Andrew x
For a moment there.....>>>..... Was I really there>>....? This is brilliant! REALLY BRILLIANT! I recognise quality now Love duncan X
32 Words, packed with power-driven resplendence & simile...Succinctly eloquent, young lady! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
Stunning imagery...metaphorical and symbolic...thanks Bonnie...10