Monday, December 7, 2015

Endless Journey Of 2015 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is like a wind,

It snaps away another shot in a minute,
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Mariyam Reyshma
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 11 January 2016

True love gives pain and joy...nicely written.

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Paul Warren 29 December 2015

Sometimes getting it out and saying it does some good.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 December 2015

A painful and heart rending poem of love lost, yearning and suffering that follows a separation. A touching biography. May God bless you with better moments in future full of love and happiness.

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Mariyam Reyshma 11 December 2015

Thank you Geeta... :)

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 11 December 2015

Life is truly a ship rocking over the deepest abyss, facing all kinds of turmoil day in day out; Smiling and crying are a part of the journey; No solace without facing them and carrying on till, one day reach a beach. Life theme well articulated to a poetic rhythm. Enjoyed.

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Rajnish Manga 10 December 2015

The poem unfolds the checkered realities of life which offer pleasures and pains intermittently. Its a great poem. Thanks for sharing: It makes me happy and sad / I tried to close my eyes / Live peacefully in the rest of my life / And fly away to the unconscious world / Where no one can hurt and play.

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Dutendra Chamling 08 December 2015

Beautiful poem..........!

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Unwritten Soul 07 December 2015

A wonderful and thoughtful journey you shared with us....well 2016 and more years will continue it with the better offer :)

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Rahman Henry 07 December 2015

Marvelous poem.... Excellently inked....10+++

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Mariyam Reyshma 07 December 2015

Thanks for the comment... :)

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