Thursday, June 27, 2013

Endless Flow Comments

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In the lap of rugged Nature
Under a shady canopy
From where the bank of river
Isn't far away, it moves
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Yasmin Khan
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Lasoaphia Quxazs 03 July 2013

Beautiful words, beautiful messages, I see I do not have to vote anymore. Yes we can look back into the past, but forgive everybody who did wrong to us, because they were teaching great lessons and we became stronger, wiser and better through their doing. Look into a future with open heart for peace, and happiness and the time comes if we can keep on long enough.

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Let the flow become flood of thought to pen and appreciate.

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Farah Ilyas 28 June 2013

Crawling of thoughts ignites our minds to do something unique us as such ur poem works Sis..well done, again selection of diction is bombastic

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 June 2013

Past creeps into present... Nice poem with beautiful images. Thank you.

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David Wood 27 June 2013

An inspirational poem Jasmeen with good images.

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