Im so sad, Im so upset,
These terrible things I'll never forget.
The way I hurt, the way I ache,
Makes me wish I didn't awake!
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sadness is just a step away from depressed...not a well state of mind but we all feel it's flow....this one was rather short yet painfully to the point....thanks Sarah :)
Sweet flow. :) a lilttle bit forced at time. Nonetheless, very heart-felt poem. I could relate...as many others could.
Sad poem, but so honest and heartfelt. Many people can relate to this, including myself. Great job girl! =)