the clock ticked slower
in the time of the roses
and saffron sunshine
such chills many thrills
before time gained momentum
in forever fields
lime green foliage
and cerulean blue skies
the gone days recalled
This poem is absolute loveliest, dear Evelyn. True imaginable those childhood days. WOW! Very beautiful and the words are here not much or lingered, but it is laden and layered and metaphored. Endless enjoyment here,5 stars and to my Favourites!
I am so touched by your appreciation of my poem, and truly by your joy inspiring words. I extend my heartfelt thanks for your kind thoughts and the 5 stars. It is an honor to have a poem among your Favorites.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is really beautiful. I love the stagnant time as one enters the nature's prime spot and just forgets everything admiring the blissful glory stored in for those who know how to be in nature both in pleasure and harmony.. love your choice of eords and painting too. Beautiful.
I love the way there are forever myriad things in nature to admire, and it's always so fresh and new. Thank you for your lovely comment.