Saturday, August 25, 2012

Endless Blue! Endless Sea! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Endless blue! Endless sea!
Oh! Fluid pulse of eternity.
Here I set my distant sight
on the full moon's guiding light.
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Captain Cur
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Timber Koleden 08 June 2025

Thank you for this majestic and poetic insight into a pirate's life! The rhymes are brilliant!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2021

Superb! Great picture of the sea can be had from this wonderful poem!

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Thomas Case 21 July 2021

This is superb writing

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Bharati Nayak 11 April 2021

Where did my comments vanish?

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Bharati Nayak 10 April 2021

We are the pirates in the high sea of life--We have to sail we have to survive-- With our love, fear, storms and struggles are here --We have to dive for the treasure hidden in the sea.-----A great poem by Captain Cur

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Anjandev Roy 10 March 2021

Superb piece.......like it....thank u...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 March 2021

Wow! Great.. amazingly sketched... just wonderful!

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Luo Zhihai 19 January 2021

I love the blue sea. In my sleep, I often hear the sound of the waves lapping on the shore.

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Shaun Cronick 30 March 2020

Captain a poem great love and mighty cheer. Superb! ! This just simply flows with ethereal imagery. 10++ and added to my waterproof locker for a smooth seas reread. Thanks to you good Captain Cur and take care and happy sailing sir.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 February 2020

Good poem, Captain Cur. Life on sea, love for sea. Classic piece 10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2018

Beautiful poem with nice theme. The translation of the poem is so nice and touching. The beginning lines are so amusing. Thanks for sharing.10

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Louis Rams 23 August 2018

the translation on this as very well done! normally when translating it tends to lose the feeling, but this did not.

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Bryan Norton 17 August 2018

My dear Captain, you certainly have exceeded yourself this time, your imagery is breathtaking. I can read this wonderful verse over and over again. Thank you.

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Captain Cur 19 August 2018

Bryan, the comment is very appreciated. The beauty and immensity of the sea. I fear the short sighted whims and greed of mankind will be her destruction with ours soon to follow. So let us sing to her beauty and hope our voices can have some positive impact.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 July 2018

summer's myth and healing breeze, towering glaciers boastful freeze, autumn's soft low hanging moon and her rays pale crescent swoon, just a LOVELY CURRRRRRR

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 July 2018

my ship waylaid, my soul reborn on a tidal swell, in the coming storm. Here I sing this lay to thee, Endless blue! Endless sea! Such a beautiful poem.. Are yu a naval captain dear poet? you are always in love with the sea, waters, moon, sunset. flowing waters, shining waters.. like your poems. tony

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Rebecca Navarre 28 August 2017

Extremely Moving, Beautiful Flow! ! ! ! ! Ever So Touching To, Heart And Soul! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Beyond #'S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ saved

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2017

Original is unknown but this translation piece in english language is stunning and captivating. A translation juxtaposed would have been interesting. Some touching most lines may be quoted... summer's myth and healing breeze, towering glaciers boastful freeze, autumn's soft low hanging moon and her rays pale crescent swoon,

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Ruth Walters 21 July 2017

very descriptive, a trip on the ocean waves and the inside of the heart of the poet :)

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Adeline Foster 12 June 2015

Lovely, does translation mean that this comes from another source? Read mine A Small Ship Adeline

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Piyush Dey 25 July 2014

this is amazing. given the flow, love and the rhymes, this is a beautiful piece. a delightful read.

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