Thursday, March 25, 2010

Endless Comments

Rating: 4.7

Sleep never comes for her
not anymore
her mind runs
, , like an old clock, ,
...
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Alyssa Lippi
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Onon Sarker 16 April 2012

nice poem. keep writing..

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What talent! A really good poem. A marvelous write, touching; D

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Jack Simone 23 April 2010

Wow, I really like this one. You are a very good writer.

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Juan Olivarez 22 April 2010

excellent prose. comes from the heart.

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Lynn Glover 19 April 2010

Alyssa: Here I believe you have hit a Home Run in the world of poetry. Endless sleep usually goes along with a never-ending lovers quarrel. A very good write. Your friend Lynn

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loNeLY AnGel 17 April 2010

this is such a lovely poem...........

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Sarah Kelly 11 April 2010

This poem is really powerful, I really feel everything that you have to say. Its really well written.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2010

All she wants is one person to care to mean it And sleep but it never comes..............this mis how endless love makes it more sweeter to breathe in with long wait.. when it comes then it brings endless joy and sweet memories.. it can turn other ways round too but it suceeds....10 read mine love at first sight... i miss.. a new love cult

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This is a great poem its like a person thtas never at ease just like me. you should keep writing like this.

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Joshua Daukei 09 April 2010

very nice poem painfull to

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Sofia Mendoza 09 April 2010

i feel like i'm in this shoes! touching...

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Swimming in the sea of sadness. Well done my friend.

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Siddharth Singh 30 March 2010

Sleepless nights bother you a lot specially when you are lonely. Nicely done.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 March 2010

painful but lovely love poem! fine!

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