Thursday, November 27, 2008

Endings Comments

Rating: 3.9

As suddenly as I fall apart,
I'm resurrected once again.
To face the lies,
to face the fears
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Viola Grey
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Stacey Watts 04 December 2008

Very beautifully written. The words are clear as they pull you in for the ultimate ending. A very sad haunting piece filled with emotion. Great job!

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totally disturbed 29 November 2008

This is very good I really like the words..take care Wendy

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Kris Smith 28 November 2008

You willbe saved to valuabl to PH and to poetry great read Viola Chis +++++ 10

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